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Dialogue Writing Tips

The most common way to indicate a new speaker’s dialogue is to start a new paragraph.

Here is an example from my novel Touched:

Rashan slouched into a nearby folding chair, not bothering to get one for Georgia. He moved a few braids from his forehead, but they fell back over his eyes. After a silence, Georgia, still standing, took the conversational lead. “So you’re a basketball player?”
“Varsity. Point guard.”
“Great.”
“Do you know what a point guard is?”
“Not exactly but it sounds important.”
Rashan laughed. “It is. Hey, you wanna dance?”

Different speakers’ words may be written in a single paragraph to save space as long as the change of speakers is clear by prompts to the reader such as Rashan laughed.

Single words such as yes, no, where, how, and why are not enclosed in quotation marks unless used in direct dialogue.

Examples:
She said yes when he asked her to marry him.
When Howard asked Mary to marry him, she shouted, “Yes!”

With thoughts and imagined dialogue that are unspoken, you may enclose the interior discourse in quotation marks or not.

Examples:

“If he asks for chocolate ice cream one more time,” Benny’s mother thought, “I’ll scream.”
If he asks for chocolate ice cream one more time, Benny’s mother thought, I’ll scream.
“Why,” she wondered, “did I worry about the test so much?”
Why, she wondered, did I worry about the test so much?

Posted on Monday, August 27, 2007, at 11:00 pm


6 Comments

6 Responses to “Dialogue Writing Tips”

  1. Keith D. Moser says:

    How do you properly write this sentence?

    When are you going, he replied?

  2. Ravinder says:

    Please write a dialogue on
    “Asif meets his teacher Mrs. Kaul ten year after passing out from school./ They both catch up on news about Asif’s career , the school & Mrs. Kaul’s health.

    Regards

    • Jane says:

      Dialogue refers to a conversation between characters in a story, movie, play, etc. Since your sentences do not contain any dialogue, no quotation marks (or slash mark—perhaps you meant to type quotation marks here) should be used. You need the plural word years after the word ten. We are unsure what you are trying to say in your first sentence. If Asif quit school, you would say “after dropping out of school.” If he finished school, you would say, “after graduating from school.” You should use the word and instead of the ampersand in formal writing, and we recommend inclusion of the series comma before and.

  3. Jack says:

    Hello,

    I understand that in English, speakers’ words are enclosed in quotation marks. However, recently I saw a book where the author uses quotation marks in some chapters, and dashes in others. I was quite surprised to see it as dashes are used in dialogues in some other languages (e.g., Polish). I wonder if it is possible and correct to use them in English instead of using quotation marks?

    Thanks,

    Jack

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